Zafrece's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Spilt Coffee]

If we only had large amounts of these skulls in the corperate world. Each killing off all the fools who trade their morals and humanity for the love of money and manotony... Perhaps then there would be hope for this world.

Gerkinman responds:

Ha ha, thats a different way of looking at it.

[Lergue of Lergends: Vi]

Good animation, pretty funny. However the voices sounded as if they were recorded using 10 dollar head set. I could still hear black noise from some of the recordings ( faint but still there). I also heard slight peaking in the recordings and the sound was slightly muffled. Simple eqing should solve both of these problems .(and perhaps a better mic) The voices were done pretty well, good match up with the lips and decently realistic inflections.

over all pretty good.

hillrdavid responds:

Thanks for the advice

[Sprite A Day Revenge: 7]

I have to say the music was the best part, it also does seem to need a bit of work here and there. The main thing i notice is the poor audio quality on allot of the audio tracks and vocals. I can still hear black noise from the voice tracks in the dante one. Tehtimmy's vocals were peaking so hard they were getting a crackle.

audio aside- pretty decent

Horsenwelles responds:

it was a rushed piece of audiowork, we know, but you get the point of it, and we did get better in the future.

[Treton Part 5 The Crusade]

Not bad, perspective is a huge problem i see you having. Not to mention the audio department was severely lacking. The large mess that i have to say was the audio could have been done much much better with a slight amount of work. the music had no reason or transitions. the sound effects were random and unpurposeful. When in doubt for voices go 16bit or 8 bit and just put square blips as voices. the story was unclear and text zoomed by when they needed to stay and stayed when they should have been much faster. Like wise goes to the scenes. They were transitioning past parts that needed longer action and the still shots seemed to pan for ages. over all the concept was there and i can tell what you were trying for, but you lacked the structure to get it across. Unfortunately is simply came out as some what of a mess.

Denfng responds:

Ty for review.