Ahh plat saw/gold saw, it's been too long my old friend. Firstly it sounds like everything you have is in the same channel. Time to copy pasta old reviews ive made.
Every sound is in the same channel from what i can hear, try separating them into a different channel, and assign them to a separate mixer track as well. This will stop allot of the sounds fighting for control over the same chan. If you hear a sound all the sudden get way softer than you intended it when another one is starting to play, this very well may be the answer.
General hertz guide-30-140 give or take, add body to a song. It gives it a flow if you will and helps blend tones and establish a feel. 140 htz to 400 htz this is your tonal bass or the bass that you generally hear that helps set the key or mode of a song. This is also where songs can tend to get muddy if not eqd correctly. mid range 400-2.5k give or take on taste, this is mostly where lower ranged chords go in to set the key in which something is being played. Upper mid, 2.5k -5.3k- Higher chords can be placed in here to help establish a mode of a said key along with leads. If chords are placed here they usually accompany the drums to emphasis the beat or add to syncopation. 5.2k-18k ( not much use going into 19-20k as those simply mud up the mix for the most part) this range is your high hats, harmonic tones of melodies and the crispness of the song all rest in this range.
General mixing tips- You should make sure to leave the unmastered kick below -6 or -8 db, ( depending on genre) that should be the loudest part of the mix, followed by the bass. pads and chords depending on how loud you want them should generally fall under -10 give or take depending on taste
+ 12 db = 400% volume increase.
+ 6db = 200%
+ 1 dB = around 10%
0 dB - No change.
- 6 dB = 50% volume decrease (half the original level).
- 12 dB = 75% volume decrease (to 25% of the original level).
I would also suggest looking into the following vst's and learning how to use them. Sylenth1, z3ta, refx nexus, Native instruments massive.
You used allot of saw sounds. Often times when you over saturate a song with too many of the same type of wave the whole thing begins to turn into indistinguishable sounds or at very least becomes harsh to listen to over a given time. The odd segment starting at 55 if i recall was out of place and seemed rather empty. Along with the chord progression being off canter.
Keep up the work, and ill check in on you again some time to see how you're coming along.